Didn't like it.
Your graphics are pretty basic, which is alright in some cases, but they were lacking much here, it feels like you've just upgraded from stick figures or something and were trying to achieve a higher level, you didnt achieve it tho. Put more time in your drawings. Especially if you're going to be using them constantly in the movie, like the dog.
I really dont like your style, but at least it got the point across which gets you some points I guess.
The timing was alright, I liked the sound, and you get extra appreciation for recording your own audio.
The story was pretty weak. The characters lacked personality. You should have worked out Charles being hit better I think.
Also, why the fuck does Charles go to doggy heaven before dying? Am I missing something here?
The way you presented your movie wasnt very good either I think.
But hey, keep trying, maybe work longer on your flashes. You'll be alright.
~B