BellClock's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Everybody Loves Charles]

Didn't like it.

Your graphics are pretty basic, which is alright in some cases, but they were lacking much here, it feels like you've just upgraded from stick figures or something and were trying to achieve a higher level, you didnt achieve it tho. Put more time in your drawings. Especially if you're going to be using them constantly in the movie, like the dog.
I really dont like your style, but at least it got the point across which gets you some points I guess.
The timing was alright, I liked the sound, and you get extra appreciation for recording your own audio.
The story was pretty weak. The characters lacked personality. You should have worked out Charles being hit better I think.
Also, why the fuck does Charles go to doggy heaven before dying? Am I missing something here?
The way you presented your movie wasnt very good either I think.
But hey, keep trying, maybe work longer on your flashes. You'll be alright.

~B

Frax responds:

I'l work on that in next movies.
Thnx for the helpful review !

[Happy Birthday Zekey!]

nope.

The sound is your biggest problem, yes indeed. I had to play it again to hear the overused and shitty joke. The poorness of your voices wouldnt have been such a problem if there wasnt such a big contrast with the other sounds. I had to turn the sound way up to hear it and then my speaker almost exploded.
Sucks.
What makes me even angrier is that the review average is still pretty decent, I dont remember the NG audience being so mellow on me when I first submitted my shit here (which, in retrospect, helped, aim to improve n all).
I saw your Clock Day movie aswell, and I didnt like it that much either, but at least that shows small signs of hope. Hang in there, maybe notify me when you get something new and better up.

B

MetalDart responds:

Well, thanks for being honest at least. Instead of just giving it a low score, I'm glad that you were brutally honest.
The whole Flash was made in a day. The voices, the characters, etc. I guess I was too anxoius to release it, and didn't work as hard as I wanted to.
I know the sound was bad, and I know the joke was overused. I just wanted to make something that I could enjoy and hopefully make others laugh as well.
As for the average, the main score of about 1.8 (as of now), is pretty low. And the review average, is higher than expected. Mostly because of the fact that people either wanted to wish Zekey a happy birthday, know me, or thought it was alright.
Thanks for all the criticism. I have seen you around and would really like to improve with Flash. If you ever feel like helping me out, be my guest.

Thank you for being the only one who gave me this tough love and insightful review. :)

[Invader Zim: TMHSE]

I can't believe how good this was.

Really, the only thing differences between this and a "normal" episode is the smoothness of the flash format, the slightly different voice acting (not criticism, it was PERFECT voice acting, the emotions were great, the simularity was so good, you could simply tell that it was different) and the length.
I'm baffled that this is not in the top 50.

Holy hell.

cyberen responds:

Its because I wrote a bad review on the Tankmen flash and now all the Johnny Utah fanboys have me blacklisted. Just another day in the portal.

[OBEY Clock Crew]

Awesome!

Awesome, my good man!

<3

Ivanovitch responds:

:) :) :)

[Ten Commandments]

Cool

Holy shit that was funny and clever, I liked the intro especially. Seemed kind of hasty towards the end. I still love it tho. I especially like the way the beerbottle Clock was killed, in the sense that it didnt bleed but broke, that's a lot better.
Too bad you stole a joke from Bugs Bunny. =)
Overall it was still great.
Fifenated.

ToadClock responds:

I stole a joke from Bugs Bunny? O.o

[Ask Al: Babies]

The graphics are fine, but that's not the point.

To be honest, I'm not too fond of your movies. I must admit on graphics over the years you guys improved a whole lot, and I'm really happy to see that. The voice acting was perfect, the soundquality was spotless aswell. The thing with this movie is, I dont really get the point, because it's not at all funny to me. The funniest part about Al speaking is the pigeon sound he makes intween, in such a way like he had almost forgotten to do it, that's what makes this character I think.
His ranting is kind of annoying tho, I'm not fond of his accent. Now, the humor is something that needs to be worked on, if you're making a monologue about how babies are made humor is pretty essential. I just didnt find it funny, the rambling felt incoherent, much like Grampa on the Simpsons and it wasn't really the funny type of random.
You've got all the star qualities, except for the writing, I guess.
Also, a thing that's really been bothering me lately is the fact that you use three accounts to post these things. Now you guys know as well as I that movies with multiple authors automatically get a higher score, which is fine, if not exploited. I take it you are both part of the Neptune Circle, yea? Why not just post under that account? Especially if other members of the Neptune Circle participated. However, if you two did all the work, you could just post it under your accounts, but the Neptune Circle account doesnt really need to be credited.
Well, whatever. That's just my two cents.

~B

NeptuneCircle responds:

Thanks for the review.
About the three accounts thing. I had no idea that movies with multiple accounts do better. We submit it under our personal accounts to have the movies attributed to us (so its in our list of movies since we made them) and we have a NeptuneCircle account so that all the NC movies are in one place. We both have other movies besides NC movies, and we wanted to have one account that is exclusively NC movies without having them lumped in with other stuff. And anyway, there is another person who makes music for us so if we wanted to add more accounts, we could add her too.

[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D 19]

Um

The first one of these actually made me chuckle a bit. Seeing Hitler and hearing "Sex on the beach" is great fun n all, I guess. But it's gotten stale too soon. Not that my opinion matters, because apparently they're all going to pass. Question: Is this series going to have like a very climactic ending, because that would be hawt. And I think you'd get a lot of appreciation out of it. And who writes the responses to the reviews anyways?

~B

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User ID 267077 responds

[Sesame Street Unleashed]

Nice.

It was kinda crappy but it made me laugh. Especially the beginning had me cracking up for a while.
Good job!

boinky33 responds:

You're kinda crappy, you crappy jerk!

[!!!JUMP AROUND!!! II]

Amazing

I <3 you

[a clock goes to blockbust]

I like you

You're quite good =)

asdsasaaaaaaaaa responds:

thankyou master